[Memet Burnett]

I really like the last sentence, but find the whole a little long.

How about:

Using gouache, acrylic or mixed media, I capture the spiritual essences of life: I pull the heart out of the ordinary and make it extraordinary.

[Memet Burnett]

To Susan Havey-

Susan, I would exclude the definition of “en plein air” (this can be explained in a follow-up discussion), and talk more about what motivates you to paint, what you are trying to capture, or why you are paint.