Archive: Workshop your Elevator Pitch

[mijwallace]

Doug

Really like the first line of your second statement It says everything about your work and makes me want to see it.

Michal

Really think your statement is great and prefer the word notion

Helen,

I agree with Michal, using psychoanalyst in your statement gives it deeper meaning

enjoying this exercise certainly challenging to distill everything into one or two sentences 🙂

[Leah]

Here’s my pitch:

My oil paintings bring a fleeting magical moment of wildlife in nature to the heart of others.

 

[martina.delange60]

Leah, I love the content. The sentence might read more smoothly if you changed the order around:

My oil paintings bring magical moments to the hearts of viewers by capturing a fleeting glimpse of wildlife in nature.

[Deleted User]

I would suggest rearrange.

 

My oil paintings bring to the hearts of others….