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Archive: Workshop your Elevator Pitch
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Thanks everyone for the feedback! I seem to be limited to the general reply option on my iPad so sorry for not being able to respond individually. I have been meaning to log in from my laptop to see if that makes a difference but haven’t had a chance yet.
Mark, I am drawn to what you are doing as well. There is so much power in noticing what is right in front of us.
I really, really enjoy all of the elevator speeches. I almost tingle with curiosity Mark, Beverly, Doug, TaLisa and Michelle. Just what I think we want. 😉
Michelle, I had to look up OOAK to figure out what you meant. Then I felt kind of silly – like in, “of course!” But I am not sure this is what you want your reader to do if this statement was written instead of said orally. So I second Beverly’s suggestion. I think the rest works well and you have my attention without the reference to one of a kind. This could be a nice second information piece of information once you have your audience hooked and asking questions.
I hope everyone is having as much fun with this as I am!
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Doug – i agree with others. love the sculpture line.
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