Archive: Workshop your Elevator Pitch

[Deleted User]

Hi Vicky. 9/10

its just me but i don’t think you need to say places or locations  ( same thing) Also not keen on the viewer in..inviting . ( in a way that invites viewers to stay and take a closer)

OR

I use ink and watercolours to depict historical sites. They’re an open invitation for viewers take a closer look and hopefully find themselves there in the moment.

Just a suggestion

Steve

 

 

[isamybella]

Okay, I am way behind, having been picked for 2 weeks of Jury Duty. That is over and here I go with a first attempt at an elevator pitch:
My art is a whimsical celebration of life crhttps://learning.theworkingartist.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/TWA-Kit-Checklist.pngeated with acrylic paintings. It invites the viewer to celebrate life’s little joys.

[Deleted User]

isamybella

“My art is a whimsical celebration of life created with acrylic paintings. It invites the viewer to celebrate life’s little joys.”

i think this is a good statement that covers what your art is about (i love a good whimsical celebration) how you do it (acrylic painter) and the hook (life’s little joys. i want to know what they are!). Perfect.

If you wanted to you could make it one sentence…

I make acrylic paintings that are whimsical celebrations of life’s little joys.

But they both sound good, whichever is easier to remember or as Crista says, rolls off the tongue. Good job, you’re done. Except for the part in front of the mirror 🙂

 

 

[Wanda K. Tyner]

I agree with Drew.  Like the single sentence version he suggests.

[isamybella]

Thanks for the input. I continue to mess with it and so happy I am able text without the html… confusion.  But you figured it out.