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  • Deleted User

    Deleted User
    November 3, 2017 at 8:52 pm

    Hi Majie.

    First and most important is that i think  it is a great idea.

    But the pitch is a bit long.

    re-create x 3 creativity x1 and create x1. too many creates !!

     

    My invention is called Re-Create.

    It is interactive and you make your own Art by  moving different shapes. Its Fun

     

    Good luck with Re-Create. Have you trialled it with young and old ?

  • Wanda K. Tyner

    Member
    November 4, 2017 at 8:30 am

    feedback welcome…

    I infuse vibrant colors with shapes, patterns and textures in glass.

     

    • Kirsteen Titchener

      Member
      November 6, 2017 at 7:53 am

      This could just be me having a crazy moment but it feels the wrong way around – it is the use of the work infuse that has me confused.  It feels as though it should read ‘infuse glass with colour, shape and texture’?  Obvioulsy it is your art so you know what and how you do the work and perhaps I’m totally wrong – its a talking point as I’m intrigued now by what exactly it is you produce and how you go about that.

    • Wanda K. Tyner

      Member
      November 6, 2017 at 9:59 am

      thanks for the feedback.  Here is my new elevator pitch.  any feedback is appreciated.

      I fuse glass into shapes, patterns and textures bringing vibrant colors to life.

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