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Deleted UserNovember 3, 2017 at 8:52 pmHi Majie.
First and most important is that i think ย it is a great idea.
But the pitch is a bit long.
re-create x 3 creativity x1 and create x1. too many creates !!
My invention is called Re-Create.
It is interactive and you make your own Art by ย moving different shapes. Its Fun
Good luck with Re-Create. Have you trialled it with young and old ?
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feedback welcome…
I infuse vibrant colors with shapes, patterns and textures in glass.
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This could just be me having a crazy moment but it feels the wrong way around – it is the use of the work infuse that has me confused.ย It feels as though it should read ‘infuse glass with colour, shape and texture’?ย Obvioulsy it is your art so you know what and how you do the work and perhaps I’m totally wrong – its a talking point as I’m intrigued now by what exactly it is you produce and how you go about that.
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thanks for the feedback.ย Here is my new elevator pitch.ย any feedback is appreciated.
I fuse glass into shapes, patterns and textures bringing vibrant colors to life.
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