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  • Mark Butler

    Member
    November 3, 2017 at 2:36 am

    My first stab at this:

    I combine the rich surface of polished bronze forms with the contrasting colour and texture of rusted sheets of steel, to create sculptures which have their origins in the microscopic world.

    Any feedback welcomed.

    • doug

      Member
      November 3, 2017 at 1:20 pm

      Mark,

      The part that makes me want to know more is – create sculptures which have their origins in the microscopic world.

      Doug

  • Crista Cloutier

    Administrator
    November 3, 2017 at 8:17 am

    Mark Butler, I’m going to tell you what I’ve been telling others. Practice saying this out loud. Pretend you’re at a cocktail party and surrounded by art collectors. This is really really close but I’ll bet it’s a mouthful. Simplify.

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