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I do like your pitch but I’m not sure about the word “exposing” – having viewed your work, I don’t feel a resonance with this particular word…it almost feels too harsh or glaring. It feels more like your work is an invitation to bear witness to the mystery of everyday life, to elevate those moment and not “expose” them (and of course, this could just simply be my own subjective bias with the connotations this word conjures of say a person exposing themselves!)
