[Michal Tkachenko]

How exciting…feedback! I certainly wrote the first paragraph much easier than the second. In fact, I struggled so much with the second that I passed it to another artist originally who helped rewrite my convoluted ending for me. But yes, now that you say it…I only mention the work briefly at the end and I don’t say much about it. I like your suggestion of having a pen and paper handy when making the work too. I almost need to have a Metal Head Part III that helps me search for what I have discovered through the process.

What an interesting impact it would be if I switched the two first sentences. It is really nice to get an outside opinion.

Thanks for the feedback.

[Michal Tkachenko]

Hello Lily,

I’ve just found this intro of yourself and realised you are part of the TWA team. I was beginning to suspect you had a bigger role. Then I thought, maybe she IS actually Crista Cloutier in disguise. I wondered why you didn’t post any of your own stuff but now it all makes sense having reread your intro! Well, good job to you for getting a bunch of introverts commenting using all your positive comments.