[doug]

Hi Drew

Very good opening “For me paintings are like journeys” then
“there’s always some mystery about it” These give the reader something to reflect on. I would leave out Sometimes I know… and But I never know exactly…
Remember they will see your painting too and there you have gone on the journey.

Doug

[doug]

Hi Memet

I think your last sentence is particularly strong. Wonder if you added a sentence towards the beginning that would help us to experience what you are saying.
Doug