Crista Cloutier
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Mike you had me riveted until that last paragraph. Would you consider losing it? because otherwise I think its perfect.
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Mark, I’m not sure how to give feedback on your statement. It’s not reading as a statement yet. There’s a lot of HOW you make work, which loses your reader in the techinicalities.
I am yearning for more WHY you make art.
I want you to write something that makes me want to look at your work right away.
I urge you to study some of the other statements for inspiration. And then, yes, that’s right, start writing again. You can do this! You’re not that far off! But I believe it can be better.
