Crista Cloutier
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Hi Memet, I want to chime in on your statement too.
I really like it. However, the words “dissect and euthanize” have the exact opposite effect on the reader that what you want your work to bring. You might consider abstracting it, for example, “as someone who has seen the worst of animal suffering” or something like that.
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Doug, for what it’s worth – I like the format. In this instance I think it works.
