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Great job Mark and you’re right you are nearly there. I LOVE the parts about how making art makes you feel. You’re right, statement 2 is stronger but I don’t think you should apologise for getting too caught up in the first sentence. I think your second sentence would be stronger as your first explaining why you made a conscious decision to work digitally and why it makes you a fantastic artist! Almost there but it is important to get it to a place you are completely happy with.
